Casting Long Shadows
I have suspected for a while that the ending of CLS is not entirely satisfactory. The actions of the protagonists are out of character, though anger might be the motivator to act thus. There are other sections with which I am not entirely happy, so I am going to do a trawl over the manuscript and make improvements. It's a job I didn't want to have to do, as I have spent so long on the novel, but it's necessary.